In The Battle Against Time
the first casualty was the floor,
dog hair was swept up into
a pile, the size of a small rodent,
and then the dogs were taken outside
brushed forcefully, only to have
another pile, the size of a small
rodent to dispose of, and I pondered
attaching the vacuum, directly
to the dogs
the floor is now hairless, mostly
dog footprints linger everywhere
proof of all the rain, with
more to come, which begs the question,
why bother?
my patience was the second casualty
youngest daughter saw the doctor
a three hour round trip which
involves driving asshats, a daughter
who tugs on my arm, endlessly
and old men with seemingly
no idea of speed limits, tottering
along
groceries were bought, not
what I needed for tomorrow,
but what I've run out of, now
the third casualty was the sink
the toilet was in need of a clean,
small clumps of shit
stuck to the rim, nobody
wants to see that,
while I waited for the bedsheets
to finish in the dryer
said toilet was given
a once over, restored
to it's former glory
the sink can wait
the fourth casualty was
the dishes, some were
crammed into the dishwasher
others sit in the sink, stacked
ready for their bath
housework is like triage
who will see what
and how much dirt
is acceptable
there is only so much time
in a day
hours spent driving,
walking dogs
prepping meals
something's got to give
today there were casualties
That poem is magnificent! Captures the time vs tasks struggles so well, and the endless repetition. Hope it is very widely read.
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ReplyDeleteVery well done! And do I know the feeling.
ReplyDeleteA common feeling isn't it, especially with dogs and just life.
DeleteLove your poem, Pixie! There's never enough hours in a day, is there.
ReplyDeleteNope, never.
DeleteI seem to be engaged in a long ruinous retreat-- like Napoleon from Moscow. Thank you for the metaphor and the oh so apt poem!
ReplyDeleteI'd like to post it on my Facebook page. May I? But I know you value your privacy. If it's okay for me to post it, what sort of attribution should I use? Just Pixie? A link to the blog? Some other name?
You can post it to facebook if you like, but no link please. You can use the name Pixie and thanks for asking.
DeleteWhat a fabulous and evocative way to write a post! I could feel your fatigue and frustration through your words.
ReplyDeleteToo much driving yesterday, six hours when all added up. Sigh.
DeleteBrilliant. Just brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
DeleteI like that. I am learning how to triage house cleaning, that is which cleaner to call to visit. Really, I only need someone to clean my shower but they can do the whole ensuite to make it worth their while. I can do the rest, which I am also triaging.
ReplyDeleteTriage is an underappreciated skill:)
DeleteTriage indeed.
ReplyDeleteI'm not a nurse for nothing:)
DeleteYes. You wrote a very fine poem.
ReplyDeleteHere is a haiku for you:
Two dogs in the house
Make a life so much harder
I guess they're worth it.
(Sorry. That last line really has an extra syllable.)
Two dogs do make life harder, especially when they're shedding their winter coats.
DeleteDave and I actually vacuumed our dogs once. It didn't work as well as we had hoped.
ReplyDeleteMy dad used to vacuum their cat, she loved it.
DeleteArguably, Charles Sangster was Canada's greatest ever poet - until now. Overtaken by Nurse Lily Pixie.
ReplyDeleteI'd never heard of Charles Sangster, so thanks for introducing me to his writing.
DeleteHas your retirement started? I think it has! I hope it has! Take time to enjoy your garden!
ReplyDeleteIt starts at the end of the month. I'm on holidays right now:)
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